Angel Hair Ice
Would anyone want to read this vampire story?
IMMORTAL ANGEL
Jessica Spencer lives a pretty average life. She lives in New York with her parents and attends Meyers Academy. She is quite content with her life until Anton moves into town. His ice blue eyes and light blonde hair, draws her in and he is quite drawn to her. The problems that follow this relationship are few but they are big.The fact that he is a blood thirsty vampire being the biggest. It takes some time to accept that the love of her life kills people to survive but once she does, its like nothing can stop her from being with him, That is until some unexpected family history of hers comes into play. Will they're love grow stronger through this royal realization or will it be crushed into a million pieces. Only time will tell.
Sorry, no I wouldn't. I'm not saying it sounds bad or anything but there are SO so so so many vampire books out there and even if you change up your storyline a bit, they're all pretty much the same. The vampire trend is going to get old and people will get sick of it soon enough. I think that no one will really want to read yet another vampire story. You should write about something else. Maybe keep your characters and the Meyers Academy bit but take the vampires out of the story and make up something creative that no one is doing. No body wants to read the same things over and over again. Sorry this is coming off so harsh, I don't mean to be rude!
